Black Blade Blues – Page Proofs complete.
The journey of BLACK BLADE BLUES from my brain to print has achieved another milestone.
I finished the Page Proof stage today. This was an enlightening stage. One of the things I learned that when you do copy edits, you should always make yourself a copy of them before you send the mark-ups back to your publisher. Luckily I did that. However, something I hadn’t considered. I did my copy edits with a green pencil. Showed up really well on the copy edited pages, but when I photocopied them, more than half the time, the green did not render completely. Oops. That was difficult in places.
For the proof stage, the first thing I did was read the novel through cold, like a reader would. I found about a dozen items to correct, many of them were things that were missed in the copy edit stage. Almost all were dropped words, or capitalizations for consistency.
Then I went through the copy edits, page for page and checked the proof pages to make sure the CE changes were included into the manuscript. Here I found a bunch more errors.
Funny thing is, some were simple misses, but a couple were because in my copy edit notes, I was obviously not clear on what the change should be.
This gives me a HUGE advantage for novel 2. Once I get to the Copy Edit stage of HONEYED WORDS, I’ll use a darker pencil or pen, make sure I can read the marks on the photocopy before sending the original to NY, and finally insure the changes are clear and precise.
I’m thrilled with how all this has gone. I have an outstanding editing team. I just hope you folks like what you read when it comes out on April 27th, 2010.
Peace.
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David PittsDecember/10th/2009 4:39 pm
I am getting excited!

Andy KavanaghJune/28th/2010 9:10 am
Really cool. I felt like it was fully 4-dimensional character development. Difficult to categorize. If it was a guy book, he would have just blown things up and the story would have ended. Yay!! If it was a chick book he would have ended the action and spent the last 50 pages talking about how everybody felt about everything….uh, wait…he did spend the last 50 pages talking about how everybody felt about everything. It must have been written by a chick…uh, nope. It must have been written by a gay dude….uh, nope. There you go: moving the furniture around on Helen Keller again
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JohnJuly/10th/2010 9:40 pm
Andy,
Thanks for posting. Life has been a little crazy for me out here. Glad you find the novel intriguing.